Hi Syntheist - here's my feedback:
First off, well done!
However, I don't see anything about it being scarce or how to use it.
People can already send "digital (fiat) cash" around the world thru paypal and other apps.
One major aspect that makes Dash different than fiat cash is that it is scarce, due to its limited supply - like gold.
The more people accumulate, the higher the value goes, so it's not just like cash that depreciates - it's also an investment!
I've added some ideas below, in blue.
Pre-roll Generic
Radiolab is supported by Dash - digital cash -
a cryptocurrecy which lets you send any amount of money over the internet. It is instant, secure, and private. You can purchase Dash to save as an investment, or send it to any company or person that has a Dash wallet. Join the revolution and download the free Dash wallet app for iOS or android to get started today. For more information, visit
dash.org/radiolab
Pre-roll Speed and Efficiency
Radiolab is supported by Dash Digital Cash, the quick and easy way to
send money over the internet. Dash arrives in seconds, and thanks to PrivateSend, Dash really is private, instant and secure. Dash is digital cash.
Download the free Dash wallet app for iOS or android to get started today. For more information, visit dash.org/radiolab
Pre-roll Money
Radiolab is supported by Dash Digital Cash, a revolutionary form of money that allows anyone to make instant, secure payments
of any amount to anywhere in the world. Dash is digital cash.
Download the free Dash wallet app for iOS or android to get started today For more information, visit dash.org/radiolab.
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Radiolab is supported by Dash -
a digital currency that is currently valued at $xUSD/Dash due to its scarcity, instant transaction speed, security and privacy. Now anyone can use Dash for everyday purchases
with your choice of debit cards, or to save and hold as an investment. Dash runs on a secure, open source, peer-to-peer
blockchain network that is safe and legal to use. Plus, Dash lets you skip the bank entirely, giving you complete control your money.
Download the free Dash wallet app for iOS or android to get started today. For more information, visit
dash.org/radiolab
Hope this helps!
DJ